I think this is starting to come along. :)
I tried looking at this with just the tone and lines in Photoshop to see if I could figure out a way to go with it.
I played around with the layout for a bit and came up with this idea.
I think I came pretty close in real life, adding a continuation of the line work to tie things together and echoing shapes to get a better balance.
This gives you an idea of the scale of the piece.
I love the Glossy Crackle Accents over the Fantasy Film.
Using the dimensional glue with the Fashion Flakes gives a great texture to the lines.